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Reply rym218, March 18th, 2016, 10:07 am

As of the moment this is posted, I'll be streaming work on the next page! come and see if you want to! just make sure you familiarize yourself with the rules on this deviation! http://fav.me/d9k219z

There is also 3 new concept arts in the concept art/Donate section! I'd love to hear what you guys think of them!

On this page I made use of a scene to scene transition where I used 3 objects spaced out between the panels. Scene to scene transitions are used to encompass a large amount of time. So panel 4 is probably taking place a few hours or so after ace was knocked out.

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Discussion:

Reply Nashew, March 18th, 2016, 10:12 am

Twitch, huh? If she's somehow alive, that's impressive on her end.

Reply Guest, March 18th, 2016, 10:52 am

Cherie's shoes have arrows on them :3

Reply DKWIdoin, March 18th, 2016, 11:37 am

Is she dead?! I sure hope not D:

Reply SkunkWitch, March 18th, 2016, 11:58 am

insert ace boner joke here
*shot* I have such a messed up mind q.q

Reply Maka152 (Guest), March 18th, 2016, 2:35 pm

She twitched! Yassss, this gives a slim chance that she will actually live!

Reply MarioKong, March 18th, 2016, 4:26 pm

AH YEAH! WE GOT A TWITCH! QUE EPIC CHERIE RETURN LATER!

Reply Tehpikachu, March 18th, 2016, 4:57 pm

hm, well... they ARE aliens, right? interesting. maybe they don't follow conventional rules.

Reply SilverNinetales, March 18th, 2016, 5:15 pm

Roll credits

Reply Clan, March 18th, 2016, 5:44 pm

Yus, noticed dat twitch during the stream. Is happy again.

Reply Raini01, March 19th, 2016, 9:05 am

She is probably alive the hole is in the middle. the heart is to the left, and the lungs are on either side. the worse damage that could have done was break a few gains, and maybe a few fractured bones. YAYYyyyYYyyyYYYYyYYYyyY!!!!

Reply Rune Knight, March 19th, 2016, 6:48 pm

@rym218:
I'm not sure which other two pictures are new, but I'm pretty sure the one about nodes is.
It explains a few things though. I had been wondering what that yellow thing below Ruthe's chin was, but I'm willing to bet it's a battery now.

"Three objects" to show a transition, huh? I see through your ruses, you've told us what they are. It's likely not Ruthe's either, his never glowed yellow.

Also, it feels good finally catching an update within 24 hours.

Reply Rune Knight, March 19th, 2016, 6:49 pm

@Guest:
They're there to tell you which way to move your foot to walk... Or she's the Avatar.

Either one is probably as likely as the other.

Reply Clan, March 19th, 2016, 8:05 pm

Hmm, TM nodes? Did she use protect, endure, or something similiar? (I dunno if its actually possible to get TM's for those moves, but hey, this is the future.)

Reply Rune Knight, March 19th, 2016, 9:31 pm

@Clan:
A good point, if you ask me, I would lean more towards something similar to endure.
This also got me to look at page 13 again. In panel 6 the center of the node was white. But in 7, it looks more yellowish (even though most of that panel is shadowed).
And of course, now that I look at the transition for this page closer... they only have seven lines, not eight like I thought at first.

So, you win this round Rym. My obsessiveness couldn't handle there being three lines on the left and two on the right.

Reply Clan, March 21st, 2016, 9:13 am

@Rune Knight: He mentioned that the nodes from page 1-13 will be off, but should be consistent from there on.

Reply Rune Knight, May 19th, 2016, 9:25 pm

It seems we've fallen backwards through time, into what is possibly an alternate reality. How will events play out from here?

(Or, you know... the site, or my browser, just ate a few pages.)

Reply 42Meep (Guest), May 23rd, 2016, 5:09 pm

@Raini01: based on the wonds placement I would also venture to guess posoble spinal chord injury, posobly even severage.

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